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First Draft DESCRIPTIVE essay



Roy Akarakian                                                                                    April 25, 2004
7L, LeRette
First Draft



            Of course life brings experiences and joys, but only the best ones would be remembered.  Events in life now may seem insignificant, like minuscule grains from a desert, but soon enough we will learn to find the true meaning of them.  However, only by retelling and reliving the past, will life become a symbol of remembrance.
               One of the many adventures in life, that I remember, is of my first class at soccer practice in the summer going to the second grade.  It was to take place in the large fields at Westchester Park.  My mother had signed me up weeks before, and was just as enthusiastic about the event as I was.  She believed it would be great exercise for a young, still growing boy of my age, and would provide much excitement.

            I can still picture those wonderful moments… just as I arrived, with no words said, I jetted off to the coach and all of the eight or nine boys standing around.  We began with the typical stretches, pulls and pushes, and of course the dreaded running, of over a quarter mile.  The games had begun, our coach assigned teams amongst the students, set goal borders and commenced with lessons.  He carefully observed our playing styles, and commented to each one of us on how to improve.  During our match the coach joined in, adding much more to our sensational feelings. 
The whole act was lively and stirring as the two teams competed.  Us, children, worked and played vigorously as if we were in the final match of the World Cup.  Though we made mistakes, it did not stop us from improving or learning.
Leaving that day was one of the hardest moments for me in this young life, yet it sparked the beginning of a new emotion.  This, was the feeling of inspiration, and the true beginning for soccer.  I have learned even more about life, by remembering, and “reliving” the memories.            
                

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